Monday, July 26, 2010

GROOVY LOVE

All incidents appearing in the following story, along with the characters,are fictitious.Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.


CHAPTER ONE

It was a bright ,sunny Saturday morning.

8 a.m and she was out of the bathroom,adorning herself in her favourite pink and beige frock.Quickly she stood in front of the mirror and started highlighting her big dark brown eyes with the special home-made kajal.She put the lip balm on her already moist and pink lips and headed towards the shoe-rack.She slided her lovely long legs in the very stylish dark brown velvet boots and came again to the mirror.

"Hhhmm Cute !!! "...she chuckled.

Leaving the long wet hair open she put on a designer hat and with the sweetest smile she headed towards the nearby taxi stand.

She took a shared cab from there to start her journey.... her journey towards happiness.

But soon all her excitement turned into anger when the car broke down. She wanted to reach home as early as posssible .But now,she was stuck on the highway.She wanted to spend the maximum time with her family as after this weekend she would be devoting all her time to her studies. The semester exams were approaching.

She stood by the taxi looking at the sky and then her watch alternately.Cool breeze was swaying away her natural burgundy hair that were now partially tied with a clutcher . The tresses were falling on her rosy cheeks that were growing red in anger.The sunlight falling on her radiant face made her shine even more.Her flawless skin glazed making her appear like an angel from above.Angel with a fancy halo. It was now when HE saw the first glimpse of HER.

She removed the curls falling on her eyes with her soft and clean hands ….to see a small white car stopping right in front of her.

“ I see you people are in some sort of trouble. Any help needed?.”

“Oh ! Yes sir !" the driver exclaimed.

The next moment everyone was inside his car.She had no option but to take the front seat next to HIM. The other three guys sat on the back seat.

There was silence for few minutes untill the guys on the back seat started their business conversation; then came the discussion on stock markets and investments; then economic scenario, inflation, poverty, employment ………

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12 :30 noon:

“ Excuse me Miss” …….. “EXCUSE ME …………. Miss”

She slowly opened her eye lids and frowned at him.He was standing with the door opened and a genuine smile on his face.

“We have arrived at your destination Miss.You can take a bus from here to whichever place you want to go.”


He looked to be a gentleman.His gestures,were kind of ,touching her heart. She was finding him simple yet attractive.Tall man,with a strong built, broad shoulders and a clean shaven face.He must be in his late twenties as his receding hairline was suggesting.But a true a gentleman indeed.

She took her bag ,grabbed her hat and quickly jumped out of the vehicle...


“ Thank You” she said while letting the car go out of her sight.



To read the next chapter,kindly click on the following link http://violet-whistles.blogspot.com/2010/07/groovy-love_28.html


10 comments:

  1. wow.. what a narration.. i felt like i am seeing a movie... excellent.. waiting for the next chapter...

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  2. @Suree Thanks :) n m glad u want to read more.

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  3. moreover the best part is u feel like getting involved with the character ... bubbly yet unfictious and offcoure close to someone i know..... very welll

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  4. @Romesh Talks : Thanx 4 d compliment :)

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  5. i would also like to add it makes u keep guessing and everytime its unpredictible .....

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  6. loved the way u described her... :)
    she seems more like u :p

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  7. @Vij :Thanx 4 d compliment. Well, all my frds r saying so :)

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  8. Hummm...falling in love with a guy...seriously wht a beautiful narration...
    Ummm...or should I say I'm fallin in love with the girl.. ;)
    Dont frown on me..I truly love her beauty....
    moving on second part...very curious :))

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  9. do i need 2 say something?????????? wooowww!!!

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  10. @Rachana Thnx Dear.. Hope u enjoy reading ahead.
    @Tushar Thnx 4 yr encouragement :)

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